Rar your ideas make bunnies flop around. *kicks away the bunnies!*
I have JUST gotten a chance to sit down and read this.
Is it mean to say I love Skywarp's little bouts of "OMGTHEWALLSARECLOSINGIN!"? I love the way you write it...you can FEEL the panic coming off of him. He's been joked that he doesn't think things through...put him in a small space...I've never seen so much OVERthinking.
I feel something may be a little...off about Future!World. *scratches head* I can't put my finger on it. It could just be the "hoshit, look at the GIANT rift between the seekers" vibe I get from the little snippets of dialogue (which would make sense, since holy crap that's a long time for 'warp to be missing)...but Screamer seemed a little more distant that normal. *shrug* I dunno.
All I keep coming back to is poor Lucy. Bringing in the search party and all they find is a broken knee joint and energon splattering the walls.
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Date: 10 Jan 2009 07:42 am (UTC)I have JUST gotten a chance to sit down and read this.
Is it mean to say I love Skywarp's little bouts of "OMGTHEWALLSARECLOSINGIN!"? I love the way you write it...you can FEEL the panic coming off of him. He's been joked that he doesn't think things through...put him in a small space...I've never seen so much OVERthinking.
I feel something may be a little...off about Future!World. *scratches head* I can't put my finger on it. It could just be the "hoshit, look at the GIANT rift between the seekers" vibe I get from the little snippets of dialogue (which would make sense, since holy crap that's a long time for 'warp to be missing)...but Screamer seemed a little more distant that normal. *shrug* I dunno.
All I keep coming back to is poor Lucy. Bringing in the search party and all they find is a broken knee joint and energon splattering the walls.