Windchaser

TECHNICALLY, this is Chapter Two, but according to the way I've been posting it this would be four. Ahwell. LE FOON!

( Automata, Chapter Four )

On other matters, I've been redesigning the Ondraii, and the Nyen. (Well, a little).

Ondraii are now "Ondra" - Ondraii is the feminine, Ondras is the masculine, and Ondrai'i is the language. Cerv = mr, Dama = mrs, and "She'heem" means "sir" (although I need a "madam" now). Trying to model them a little off giraffes - doodled something up at lunch but it reminds me of a picture I saw a while ago of a Kirin, so I'm going to work on it. Giraffes have nice eyes, after all. :) Females no longer have true antlers, but little stubby bony growths.

Nyen are not just GM-ed, but rather GM-ed of pre-existing species; males have horns/antlers because they're a throwback from their Ondra genes (but since the GM workup isn't very good, older males tend to get a calciferous buildup on their skulls, whereas true Ondra drop antler cleanly) although females don't grow them at all. The tentacles are derived from DuSkai, the long tail from Kabrii. So... yay!

More later. :) And maybe art.

Edits: *adds in the tags so she can find it again more easily*

Just seen the advert that most makes me go "buh...?" on the TV. In among the adverts for coffee makers and shavers and washing powder, there came an ad for... an MRI scanner. Yeah, them big noisy things they have in hospitals and use for looking at the body's tissues when x-rays won't do it. WOAH GEE I THINK I'LL JUST GO BUY ME ONE OF THEM, BABY! Nowhere to put it but HEY it's GOT TO BE GOOD, they ADVERTISED IT on the GOGGLEBOX! Right? RIGHT?!

Meh. Anyway. Chapter three (or whatever) of my little story, bumbling away happily... And hey guesswhat, the other pivotal character is FINALLY introduced.

( Automata, Chapter Three )

Thinking... whee. Just a random little idea. I still need to name one of the main characters, but the other main (at the moment, there may be more) is a "parallel organic variant" of Ivy. These DON'T start at the start of the story, as (as ever) I have yet to start it properly, I just wondered about opinions. Or am I hoping for too much? :P Anyway.

( Notes from a 'Mirrorverse' )