All gone weird

My new storyline has gone all stupid; I'm not sure what I ate for supper last night but it really made my ideas go all weird - and Iios got into a rage and showed what he's capable of (at least he had a semi-reason for doing it - can't say it made Eri any happier, though). :P

I think I need to beat the idea with a stick and get it back into order.

( ...and you KILLED them...! )

May post the other bit/more later, but I'm at work now *hides* (okay, well, lunch, really. too, many, commas) and I don't have it with me. Plus of course I ought to try and get the FIRST idea finished, but pfft this is more interesting. ;)

(note: "Gavos" and "Alopeia" are Vul deities, not an alternative name, so it's like saying "Christ", or something. Just in case anyone wondered why she was randomly saying names :P)

Edit: (23:01, at home) Okay, so it's rather biased. ;) Might make more sense here:
All the notes so far, in a mostly-correct order